Use the inflection of your voice to avoid a monotone or singsong approach.
變化你的聲音來(lái)避免單調或者太過(guò)喧鬧。
Suddenly, he heard a sigh from the pavilion nearby. He went over to see Diao Chan, the sixteen-year-old, very beautiful singsong girl in his family.
他忽然聽(tīng)見(jiàn)牡丹亭處有人長(cháng)嘆,走過(guò)去一看,原來(lái)是家中十六歲的美麗歌女貂蟬。
Apart from its triteness and emptiness, the paragraph above is bad because of the structure of its sentences, with their mechanical symmetry and singsong.
除了陳腐與空洞外,這段文字還因為自己的句子結構——對稱(chēng)呆板,節奏單調——而成為敗筆。